O.T. Native English Required
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All, I have some English text on my Website, but since I'm not a native English speaker, there are some syntax error here and there. I would be very glad if someone could spot the wrong text and suggest me the right one. The website is here: http://www.sergiomarcello.com Thanks a lot in advance, Sergio. |
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Long post alert! Here is what I would change, hope it helps. :) ------------------------------------------ Home This site is about my software development, I'm focusing on games here, firstly because I have fun while programming Do you want to challenge your friends in a frantic deathmatch duel? Then get BomberLAN, a remake of the legendary Amiga Bomberman. It's also playable Asteroids, lots of Are you a space rider ? Is this meant to be rider or raider? Then don't miss Asteroids Ultimate, and be prepared to save the planet - and yourself If you are brave enough, you'll able to save your score in the hall of fame and become famous worldwide! Are you good at 3D First Person Shooters? Do you think you have no rivals? Wait before you try Dangerous Robots. Take a deep breath and jump into the arena. Dangerous Robots is hard to master, very hard. Don't say I didn't ------------------------------------------ Asteroids 70's A remake of the legendary Asteroids, featuring endless levels with increasing difficulty. This remake allows you to also record and playback a whole game session, which can be later played randomly. Three default playback files are included, and new ones can be recorded and exchanged with other players. An interesting application of this feature would be showing the playback in a shop - and watching the customers ------------------------------------------ BomberLAN Check out this remake of the legendary Dynablaster Bomberman! This fully functional This version is very close Challenge your friends in a frantic bomberman duel !!! Note: do not use the spacebar during the game, this will be fixed in the next version ;-) Who will be the Bomberman Champion? ------------------------------------------ Dangerous Robots You are a very good robot There is a Dangerous Robots is Controls are: arrow keys to move, alt to strife, and left control to fire. You can repair the ------------------------------------------ Alex A funny joke about a friend of mine, Alex, in a really hard working journey... Suddenly he has lots to do, ------------------------------------------ So To Speak So To Speak is an application which uses the internal Window's Speech Syntesizer, which is normally installed on Window operative systems. You can even load a text file and let the program read it for you. Since the source code is included, you can tune it for your own application to generate dynamic talking. ------------------------------------------ TCP Tutorial Soon or later, you'll meet this magic word: Networking. It brings a new lease of life Well don't let you get down! Once you break the ice, it all becomes easy. The following tutorial is aimed to newbies, but also to intermediate coders as well. Not only does it guide Here is the link to the Blitz community code archive entry: TCP Internet Chat Alternatively, you can read the tutorial directly Another tutorial about LAN UDP Scanner Again, you can read it directly from this link: UDP Scanner A big Thank You to the people which have e-mailed me stating that |
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Hi rIKmAN, thousand thanks for your time, I've *really* appreciated your work ! You definitely own a pizza and a beer, drop me a line if you plan to travel to Germany someday ;-) By the way, let me know if you need an Italian translator ;-) Best regards, Sergio. |
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No problem semar :) People on here help me out when I need it, so when I am able to return the favour to others I'm more than happy to do so. I will let you know if I ever come to Germany, and I might take you up on that Italian translation offer in the future, thanks! :) |